Michael, this story continues to be very good.
Your Lois is amazing. You've really captured the essence of the comic book Lois, her strength and her intelligence, and also have added the 'likeability' of the small screen version.
Your Clark is even reasonably likeable, and not quite such a lunkhead.
The college flashback was a nice touch.
Tank (who wonders who the redhead is... Duh!)