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Getting late...sorry I forget to title the topic "comments" (LOSER!)
Anyway this is what I said in my blooper topic:
Well, this looks like it could be some fun. So many things for Herb to show Clarissa. How far back is he going to go? To Smallville, KS, watching her Dad's powers develop?
To the Daily Planet, like Lois fears, so her daughter can watch her treat Clark badly???
Interesting concept...continue onward!
Chris
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Don't worry, Chaabreh - blooper topics are easily deleted.  Just for future reference though - if you want to change anything in your post, even the header, all you need to do is click on the edit button. That's the little icon on your post that looks like a pad and pen. Then you can fix any booboos you make. (For which we've all been extraordinarily grateful from time to time  ) LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Yay!! Time travel!!  more!!!
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heh, Clarissa's a cute kid. (How do you type her name properly? My fingers keep sticking a K in there <g> ) And I'm curious to see how she reacts to whatever it is she's gonna see... write more, post more (And welcome back!) PJ
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Hi, Great start.  Dont stop posting. More ASAP, please. MAF
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I think this is gonna be exciting. Post more soon, Julia 
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Windfall Welcome back!  A wonderful start! I'm a bit surprised that Lois and Clark let Clarissa go.  Do they really want her to see them when they first met? How far back is Herb going to take her? Wouldn't they be worried that something may go wrong?  This is a very interesting premise and I can't wait to see what happens next. Tricia 
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Great start! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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He was anxious to meet her, and hopefully take her on an incredible journey. Absolutely looking forward to another time travel adventure. Intriguing and interesting
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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You've offered us a surprisingly hopeful look at LnC's future. Utopia seems to have taken the express to get there so quickly! I do like your writing, but I am Dictator-for-Life of the anti-Herb club and I'm afraid I simply cannot read a story where Wells plays a starring role. Unless, of course, he is universally panned and insulted along the way.  Chris Carr's Joe Slabotnik story fits the bill nicely there! So I'll just welcome you as a writer for the boards and urge you to really really quickly write something else. Without Herb. Because from your writing, I know I'd really enjoy it. Hazel
Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.
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Windfall
great beginning
looking forward for more
merry
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