sorry i missed this before. i've missed quite a bit of fic lately. just caught up on parts 1 and 2. very interesting start. it will be cool to see l&c's relationship from clarissa's perspective.
i do wonder just what wells has in mind. what does he hope she'll get out of this? why does he think she needs to see this? you've got me curious.
there is one paragraph in part 1 where i had a few nitpicks. nothing major, just little things. plutonium is an element, not an alloy. wells's machine, last we heard, ran on gold, which is still fairly rare. incidentally, gold is also an element. also, "back to the future" dealt with a series of disasters stemming from a child going back in time and inadvertantly interfering with his own parents' courtship. it all came out well in the end, but i'd think wells, if he is familiar with the movie, would have something to say about the comparison.
like i said, minor details, all, but they did kind of pop out at me.
in any case, i'm enjoying the story, overall, and looking forward to more when you get around to it.
Paul
