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Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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Oh God Leela! this is soooo hot! I loved it but are you going to move into the nfic folder soon? It is getting very heated. I think this story needs to progress into the sexual content since it is so enmeshed in her fears and her dreams. I hope you do an nfic version. I don't think you have to be that graphic, but certain things need to be said and done and I don't know if you can do them in the fanfic folder. Great job, she has really progressed. More soon. (I am fanning myself) Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Yes, I vote for the nFIC version. I was in that room vicariously with them, Lynn! whew!
Lois is ready! Do we have to wait for next weekend for part 53?
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Hi, Wow! Great part.  Words bubbled through her mind, and ached to burst out and be heard: Stay. Stay the night. Make love to me. She is taking big steps.  
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“So you don’t want to stop?” Insecurity laced her voice, and his eyes darkened again, making her feel a shiver inside.
“I want… nothing more… at this moment… than to kiss you senseless. To press you back against the couch – to feel your entire body pressing against mine – to join with you in the most intimate way possible,” he growled. “And I want that… now!”
“Oh,” once again, all she was capable of was a breathless gasp.
“Is it okay that I told you that?”
She nodded her head mutely. She was feeling a very heady combination of fear and desire, and she wasn’t even sure she didn’t want the scenario he had just described to happen. Her body wanted to blindly arch towards him, to entice him further into a primitive rhythm, but the part of her that had been through a hellish ordeal was holding her back.
Words bubbled through her mind, and ached to burst out and be heard: Stay. Stay the night. Make love to me. Yowsa! I had to check that this was posted in the PG-fic folder! Hot stuff Leela! I really think we need an nFic interlude. This was a great scene..can Lois' brain continue to win out over her body's desire for Clark!? MORE soon please!!  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Leela WOW! I love this part.  Lois's progress is great and very realistic. I can't wait to read the next part. Please post ASAP.  Tricia 
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Thanks everyone!!
About the next chapter... it's not written yet, and I do have some major deliverables next week - and yet, there is hope - I did manage to write two sections in one day, 2 weeks ago (parts 51 & 52), so maybe I can keep this up!
As far as the nfic - yes, i realize that an nfic version will soon be required. I editted about 2 or 3 words in this section because I thought I had crossed the line, but DEFINITELY can't let the "PG" rating hinder the story.
I will, as the need presents itself, post nfic versions.
I will also familiarize myself with the policies set forth by this group, so I know how to do this!
Thanks again!
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Wow!!! 
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This is *amazing* Leela!
wow.
I can see this might need to head into nfic territory -- if/when it does, a pg-ified version would be a good idea if you can manage it, but at least *please* post a notice here that you've got something in the other folder, 'cause I don't usually check that one out... and I would really hate to miss a word.
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Pam -
Whenever there is an nfic chapter, there will be a corresponding fic entry. I can't leave gaps in the story!!!
That will challenge me, intellectually. I am always impressed when people can do that - and I hope I don't screw it up!
Anyway - thank you all. This was fun to write, and I feel like this story might actually have a final chapter one day! (At least for 'section 1')!
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Stay. Stay the night. Make love to me. Please please let Clark's telepathy have kicked in here!   -Breanna Kay
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Trask: Does Superman have any telepathic powers?
Lois: (blushing) I hope not.
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