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#11560 03/21/04 08:28 AM
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Hi,

Great part. drool


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#11561 03/21/04 10:05 AM
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Good instalment.

The A plot is heating up. The B plot is getting more complicated. And Jimmy is as stupid as ever. Somebody should just put the poor fool out of his misery (and ours).

Tank (who thinks that Clark should use this opportunity to tell Mayson that being a blonde, he has absolutely no interest in her)

#11562 03/21/04 12:43 PM
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Great Part! But too short! Clark needs to talk to Lois again as Superman as soon as possible.

Clark is uncomfortable with Lois knowing about his "date" with Mayson mad . If he decides to date Mayson smile1

Ingra


Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
#11563 03/21/04 02:02 PM
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I hope that Lois somehow runs into Clark and Mayson at the football game.

She is jealous, and doesn't really know why yet.

Clark needs to be straight with Mayson and tell Lois the truth.

Looking forward to the next one!

And I loved Lois' motherly feelings toward Carla.


Chris

"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
#11564 03/21/04 09:25 PM
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Gerry

Excellent A-plot development! smile1

Tricia cool

#11565 03/22/04 01:11 AM
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"I don’t get it, Clark," said Jimmy.

"Get what?"

"Why you order a pickle and cole slaw when Lois always takes it before you can eat it?"

Clark looked at Lois enjoying the cole slaw. "It comes with the sandwich."

"No, it doesn’t," Jimmy corrected.

"Oh!" he said watching Lois finish the remains of the cole slaw. He just shrugged his shoulders and continued with the earlier discussion. "What would the Rossis have known to get them killed?"
:rolleyes: Jimmy.... wake up!!! smile1


"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way."

Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial

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#11566 03/22/04 05:47 AM
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Commenting for two posts, Gerry!

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"Superman came over last night after the Charity Ball," Lois said as she kept her eyes on the road ahead of her. "He’s a jerk."
goofy I note, however, that you definitely prefer the utterly clueless Jimmy... Tank should be pleased.
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Remembering that he had a date with Mayson, she decided to wash her windows instead.
Hilarious! goofy

Good, interesting, *new* A-plot, which is always fun. smile


Lois: You know the deal.
Clark: Superman gets the guys in capes, Lois and Clark get the guys in suits.

-- Action Comics 827
#11567 03/22/04 10:47 AM
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Since it's relatively quiet on the boards so far tonight and it's been cold outside today, I think I'll post the next section.

Thanks for your feedback.

gerry (who refuses to let Tank sway her opinion of Mayson and will force him to stick around until the end.)
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