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Good! smile

You are doing a good job with the two shows smile

Jose smile1


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I like it! thumbsup

Looks like Andrew is finally making some progress with Lois. That's good, I don't want to watch her suffer anymore. Same thing for Clark, he has to stop thinking only about himself and as I can see, Tess talked some sense into him.

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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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I've come to this story a little bit late and have been catching up. Now that I'm up to date I just have to say that you're melding the two tv shows in a wonderful way. Normally, I'm not one for crossovers but this one is done excellently. It helps though to have seen both series...

You're capturing the ways of the angels very well and also keeping the LnC characters in character. laugh

Wonderful job and keep going.
I'll keep reading!

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I love this story so far. Just agnsty enough to NOT be annoying laugh

I do have one little problem.

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“At the moment, I work for Perry White,” he said simply, but when Clark said nothing further, Andrew continued.
It may just be me, but it made me feel that Andrew knew that Superman was Clark, when I know that is not the case.

Just a minor thing. I'm sure its just me.

James


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