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A few more clues......and a little love starting to brew......
Chris
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A little love huh? That's more like swoon till you croon!  This Timmy thing and Jimmy is really too ironic, and strange how Lex, although dead, seems to be the bad penny that just rolls right on back. Have you been to Paris? I am asking because I have and your description of the Eiffel Tower is rather what I remember when I was there about two and a half years ago.  Good stuff, at any rate, makes me want to go back. More soon please. 
'Irony is so ironic...'
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Love is in the air!! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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This story's just great, keeps drawing me in. You guys are really good at these "brainstorming" conversations between Lois and Clark.
So if Luthor is sooo apparently dead maybe he's not. This wouldn't be the first story where he came back to bite those two in the butt.
That bad Penny remark was dead on.
The whole Lexcorp take over thing has got me thinking hard too. How long ago did Jimmy get rich? HMMMM, just cause he's the good guy in one world doesn't mean he's a good guy in all of them.
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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Whoo hoo, this is going along nicely. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Never been to Paris, but took an internet tour of the Eiffel tower when I was writing the chapter. One of those "click on this part and we'll show you what it looks like!"
Love the internet.
I would love to go there, since I took like 5 years of French.
I'm glad I was fairly realistic, thanks!
Chris
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Chris A great part!  I enjoying this immensely and can't wait to see what happens next. Tricia 
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Chris, another terrific part!  You keep weaving this tale wonderfully!!! Boy, you really can't tell the good guys from the bad in this alt-world..... you've even got us questioning Jimmy now!!  Great job!!!! I love how you are bringing Lois and Clark together..... very sweet, romantic and cautious. Perfect!! S (who now can't wait for the next part, since she finally caught up with you again )
"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'
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Thanks everyone that's reading this story. And special thanks to Avia, Saskia and RetroRose for brainstorming bad guys with me! So much fun!
Let's see we have a Lenny (?), a Timmy, related to Jimmy/James, a John (aka Jack), a Mark, and of course Nigel. And are we sure that Lex is really dead?
And a mysterious substance arriving in the Brazzaville airport at 6pm....
Chris
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