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#11758 03/31/04 02:08 AM
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Nice move Lois!! smile1


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Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial

A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
#11759 03/31/04 04:11 AM
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Ooh! Lots of nice stuff in here! Love the Lois and Clark interaction; as with Raisins, you show how well they know each other and how much they act in synch with each other. Nice little niggles of jealousy around Mayson, too! thumbsup

I like the use of Charlie King, as well. And now there's trouble on the way... eek

More soon!


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Just a fly-by! *waves*
#11760 03/31/04 06:20 AM
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Nice investigative story going, all the little L&C quirks we all love going on.

My favorite piece here:
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"What?"

Clark blinked. "I didn’t say anything."

"You’re smiling at me."

"Sor..." He stopped himself from completing the word. He wasn’t sorry that he was staring at her. He loved watching her move, but he couldn’t tell her that. "I was just thinking."

"Happy thoughts?"

"How incredibly brilliant you are. I love the way you face a problem head on and come up with a solution."
Good cover, Clark! Charming and sneaky all at once.

Next insallment soooooon pleeeeeeeze!

TEEEEJ drool

#11761 03/31/04 08:34 AM
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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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#11762 03/31/04 03:07 PM
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Great part razz . (and remember that I never liked Mayson wink ).

I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
#11763 03/31/04 03:47 PM
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Gerry

An excellent part! smile1

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