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OK the next couple of chapters is when the action is to begin. Enough of this sappy love stuff!!!
Comments appreciated.....so much!
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Great part, cant wait for more.  The next parts containing some action, that’s great  . But I have to say that I kind of like the sappy love stuff to  (being the hopeless romantic I am  )
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Great Part! I love that Lois is strong and trusting, specially after everything that happened to her. But Clark is in trouble if he doesn't tell her about the other Lois before things get too serious between them. As for the sappy love, I'm loving it so far  !!!Ingra
Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
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So the nine part set up is over and we are heading into the meat of the story (  ). Boyle isn't the brightest bulb on the planet, but bringing in Nigel sure isn't going to help our duo any. On the personal front, Clark, in true Clark fashion, is managing to dig himself quite a hole with his evasions. The only fortunate thing is, that Boyle and Nigel will probably kill Clark before he is forced to tell Lois 'his story'. Tank (who thinks this Lois is remarkably unbitter about losing 10 years of her life)
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Chris A great part! Tricia 
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I really can't think of much to say with regard to this part, the fact that Lois trusts Clark to the extent that she does indicates to me that she's listening more to her instincts about him then to any outside 'influences'. I really like the romantic parts, but I'm getting ready for some action and am anxious to see what Boyle is up to...no question he's not the sharpest tool in the box!!
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Almost everyone has remarked how Lois has trusted Clark so quickly.
Well, in OUR world, she warmed up to Superman right away. Why wouldn't the same thing happen here? She is meeting the real Clark, which OUR Lois didn't have the opportunity to until he revealed himself. She is a little infatuated with his great looks, as well as his powers. But his goodness and sweetness is what is really winning her over in her heart.
That was my perspective writing this, anyway!
Chris
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This Lois is ten years older too, ten years alone and scared, it's nice to have the strongest guy in the world at your beck and call.
I'm betting Mark is gonna make the wrong decision here, or else it wouldn't be very suspenseful unless Clark was in danger too.
I'll just have to wait and see.
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Hi, Great part.  He did need to check in at the Planet, however. He decided that he would e-mail Perry and see if he had been able to find anything out when he went over there. He wanted to get in touch with Timmy Carlson as well and see if he could figure out who “Lenny” might be. In his e-mail, he asked Perry to call Timmy at the Planet and see if he could run some data relating “Lenny” to “Luthor Corp” and see if there was a connection there. Good idea! More ASAP, please. MAF 
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More!!! Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Hey Chris.... YAY, I caught up again! And let me just say that I am loving this story! )
"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'
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