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FDK: The Monster #11972 04/05/04 01:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Very interesting. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: The Monster #11973 04/05/04 04:10 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 30 Muddy River Mouth, SEA tenoh27 Blogger
tenoh27 Blogger Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 30 Muddy River Mouth, SEA	Fascinating! Quite unexpected ending. Is that the end? More, please. Thank you.

Re: FDK: The Monster #11974 04/05/04 07:02 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Hi there, and welcome to the boards. Hope you have fun here. I think it's very brave of you to post a story in another language not your native one - the very thought of doing the same thing in Italian or French or whatever would scare the bejesus out of me! LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: FDK: The Monster #11975 04/05/04 07:37 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 9 Spain B Blackmamuth Blogger
Blackmamuth Blogger B Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 9 Spain	thank you; I really appreciate your comments. If I should be honest about writing more, i already have in mind a possible continuation. perhaps I will write morre about that Particular Altclark.

Re: FDK: The Monster #11976 04/06/04 12:31 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Hey! This was a great idea, a great plot! Your language does need some polishing, but it's still very good. (a comment that I don't know how much could count, as I'm not a native English speaker either) I love this twist and I would not mind reading some more. AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: The Monster #11977 04/06/04 01:26 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719 L L Columnist
L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	Was Lois the monster? You did mention 'him' at one point, and so that threw me. Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: FDK: The Monster #11978 04/06/04 02:01 AM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 9 Spain B Blackmamuth Blogger
Blackmamuth Blogger B Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 9 Spain	yes, Lois was the monster. Im Eeeeeevil. Edit: edited the story again. hopefully there are no more errors.

Re: FDK: The Monster #11979 04/06/04 05:01 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719 L L Columnist
L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	I noticed you did edit it, but that paragraph still has the word him in it, which definitely references your monster as being a man. Only being nit picky because the ending is such a good surprise, you don't want it to be contradicted by your earlier text. Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

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