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FDK - City by the Sea (2) #12007 04/07/04 12:25 PM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN Wanda Detroit OP Beat Reporter
OP Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN	SQD!!!! I'm so happy to see this... it is great... the letter is so poignant (definitely getting me a little teary-eyed)! You know I love it! grin Can't wait for more... -Wanda "He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.

Re: FDK - City by the Sea (2) #12008 04/07/04 01:46 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Quote The Planet had been rebuilt; she’d won another award for investigative journalism; had even made a few new friends. There had been a new beau, though it hadn't been very serious, a new apartment, and change of style. She wore more casual business suits, sported shorter hair, had taken an actual vacation or two. She used her days off to write and recently published her first novel. There was a weekly phone call from surrogate parents in Kansas. She'd stood next to the Kents and said good-bye to a very dear friend when he hadn't been found. She was the reporter who had written up the official farewell to Superman. And she'd attended her own parents' second wedding ceremony. A beau! She didn't miss Clark very much. More ASAP, please. MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK - City by the Sea (2) #12009 04/07/04 02:18 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Nice start. Looking forward to more Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK - City by the Sea (2) #12010 04/08/04 11:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Good instalment. With this you managed to move this from just another BoTP/HoL rewrite, to a more interesting ASU diversion. This could be fun. You've painted a nice picture of a woman (Lois) who has and is dealing with her mistakes, and her losses, yet is moving on with her life in a positive manner. Too often, with the knowledge of Clark's death, writer's put Lois in a severe tailspin where she never recovers until she's able to 'find' Clark again. Lois is stronger than that. While, she will definitely miss Clark. Probably til the day she dies. She would still 'suck it up' and move on with her life. Way to go Lois. Of course, I'm assuming there'll be some complications coming soon. Tank (who likes the direction this fic has taken)

Re: FDK - City by the Sea (2) #12011 04/09/04 01:02 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany Sira Hack from Nowheresville
Sira Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 244 back home in good ol' Germany	Wow, what a take-off for a story! I love it. It has lots of promise and I'm dying to find out what'll happen next... Will Lois meet Charlie? Keep the parts coming!!! ~Sira

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