Hi,
Great part.
The conversation had started shortly thereafter. As they drove across town, she told him of her father, a career military man who had been strict and commanding, and who had raised his daughters to be driven, no matter what the costs. She talked about growing up on army bases around the world, before finally landing in Metropolis and settling there to finish high school and go to college.
She don't talk about her mother.
Does her father still in the army?
“You’re Bolt, aren’t you?” she asked as he straightened up again. Kevin looked into her eyes, not really sure what to say. After a moment, she reached out to him, grabbing his shirt, her eyes wide with fear. “Where’s Superman?” she asked, and he took a deep breath, shaking his head ever so slightly. Her grip only tightened as she pulled him in toward her. “Where’s Clark?” she hissed, and Kevin knew for sure. This was his mysterious friend, the one that had been waiting.
“He needs our help,” Kevin answered, and they both turned toward the Daily Planet building.
Maybe if Lois saw this people she will recognize them from the base as military.
You didn't kill Perry White?
More ASAP, please.
MAF