Ooooh! So that's what happens when he marries Mayson; he still wants Lois!
Well, I've heard it said, "the subconscious knows."
Uh, this doesn't feel like a stand-alone story to me - more like the first chapter of a great epic.
I'll be watching the boards with interest to see if you decide to expand your intriguing idea into serious fanfic territory.
I think your muse took over and gave the plot of an extended multi-post story, not just a one-timer.
And it's screaming nfic version, too.