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#12656 05/08/04 08:02 PM
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Such a little thing really, a kiss...most people don't give it a moment's consideration. They kiss on meeting, they kiss on parting, that simple touching of flesh is taken entirely for granted as a basic human right.

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Ooooh! So that's what happens when he marries Mayson; he still wants Lois! eek Well, I've heard it said, "the subconscious knows."

Uh, this doesn't feel like a stand-alone story to me - more like the first chapter of a great epic. thumbsup I'll be watching the boards with interest to see if you decide to expand your intriguing idea into serious fanfic territory. wink I think your muse took over and gave the plot of an extended multi-post story, not just a one-timer. laugh

And it's screaming nfic version, too. smile

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Yup, what Ethnica said. This is the taster for a much longer story. Enquiring minds what to know how Clark ended up with Mayson, how long he's been married to her, and if he's going to stay with her - and what Mayson and Lois think about all of this!

So I have one word for you: MORE!

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???????

!!!!!!!

I agree with ethnica and Yvonne! MORE!!!!!!!

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WOW! Hee hee. Great surprise ending there, I had to read it twice!
Nice work!!
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Hi,

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“Go back to sleep, you were just dreaming,” she mumbled with a yawn. Clark curled back up and rolled over.

“‘Night, Mayson.”
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laugh

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LOL! smile1
Count me in as one of the readers wanting more!

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You should go to bed earlier wink

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