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YaaaaY!!! She's got him all unclothed all to herself...oooo, are you sure you're not going to need the other folder to post part 59?
I'm relieved to know the evil ends are tied up here in this dimension, but Lord Kal, his bad self, is still out there with Mr. Tempus still being dimension hoppy.
You gotta give our Alt-Clark a shot at him, maybe even our Original-Clark too.
Lois Killed the CLONE!!! HAAA!
TEEEEEJ
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Yes we are all waiting for a crossover into nFIC so don't disappoint us@
You've got the perfect setup now too....a naked man sleeping........HMMM
if it was me, and I looked like Lois, and Clark well....looked like CLARK, well....hormones would take over for sure!!
Have you figured out how many pages this will be when it's all concluded? Will it be a new fanfic record???
Can't wait for #59!!
Chris
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TEEEEJ - you crack me up!
Chris - I have NO IDEA how long this story will be. It's writing itself, and sometimes it gets cranky and refuses to cooperate. Mostly I don't argue with it.
*YES*, I will fulfill my nfic promise... no worries. Let it happen - be patient -all good things to those who... wait.
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Hi, Great part.  She let herself in, and saw no sign of him. She put down the bag of groceries and the bottle of wine that she had been carrying, and she approached his room carefully.
Her heart nearly stopped.
He had set up the sun lamps, and he was lying in bed. Fast asleep. And…
My god… he’s completely… naked!  Get back here! More ASAP, please.  MAF
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Her heart nearly stopped.
He had set up the sun lamps, and he was lying in bed. Fast asleep. And…
My god… he’s completely… naked! 
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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dum da dum dum!  A naked Superman..wow, I have dreams about this one! ahem  Great part Leela..looking forward to nfic  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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YIPPPIIEEEEE!!!!! I was so glad to see this tonight! And what a great part. The clone is Dead and Clark will be OK and Klein is trustworthy and Lois and Clark went home and Lois's family is great and Clark is NAKED! Oh yum! Now this is a totally different way to see him then the first time she saw him naked. A much better way. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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Leela Another fantastic part!  Please post the next part ASAP. Tricia 
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You'd darned well better post the next part this week! And if it involves me taking a rare trip into the nfic folder, I won't complain  Although I think really what I'm looking forward to most is them talking - really talking. About what they've been through, and what they have together. And if Lois has made a breakthrough to where she sees Clark as 100% Clark and 0% Lord Kal, that'll just make things so much more interesting  And I can just imagine how bewildered Clark will be by the change!  Post more!!! PJ off to update the TOC
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He left without calling her!!!
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So great.
Just love how you put me inside their heads, how you make me feel for these characters.
Such a rich portrayal, and yes, I see we're reaching a conclusion. Man, how selfish would I be to deny you that...after all the years you've put into this?? But I hate to see it end. This is one of my all-time favorites. Unforgettable.
And I see the next part is up, but didn't want to read ahead without letting you know how much I love what you're doing.
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
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Thank you *all* for your lovely and inspring comments. They mean so much to me. I promise to keep this up at decent pace.
CC, there is a slight chance of a sequel here - it's been hinted and requested - a visit to bad-universe. I even have a motivation that will make LL change her fierce little mind... but sigh, I can't even keep up with juggling this story and life, so I may end up writing it first and then posting it when I have a very healthy amount written, so as not to continually disappoint with my time-lackage.
But it isn't over *yet*, and yes, nfic is coming soon.
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CC, there is a slight chance of a sequel here Woo-hoo! Oh please, oh please, oh please, go with that thought, Leela... Need a BR? Need a co-author? Need someone to watch your kids so you can think? Fetch your coffee..? CC- shameless begging concluded, off to read...
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
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CC - did I even dream that you may have offered to CO-author something?
Now, if that isn't a dream come true, I don't know what is...
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Are you kidding?? I'd do your taxes!!
CC
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Way cool, CC!! Your talents as a writer are amazing, and I'll be happy to continue this discussion via 8027cb0391d559f5bb56ecc58c38496a@orangatango.com
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Non sequitur here, but I couldn't resist. L, is that your real email address? How on earth can you remember all those numbers? And letters too, in their right places?  metwin1
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