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Now THAT was evil, Sas. In a nice way. Very good story!!  Happy birthday, Sara  See ya, AnnaBtG.
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Evil, Sas! I loved it! I kept waiting for the hero to fly in and save things, only to find out he was dead (you didn't *really* kill him, did you?). And so I waited for Perry or someone to stop it. And then I realized there wasn't enough left on the scroll bar and, sure enough, there she was. Lois Luthor.
Good job!
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Hi, OMG! Your are  .  MAF PS Happy Birthday, Sara!
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Um Ew! You turned into Tank! Fix it! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
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On no no no!! What have you DONE??  This cannot be left like this..come back this minute!! Bad, bad writer!!  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
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Saskia A great story but very evil!  I thoroughly enjoyed it. Happy Birthday, Sara! Tricia 
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Oh Evil woman.... 
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I must say, I'm almost disappointed.. this wasn't nearly as evil as I expected  Like Tricia said, you did a superb job with Lois's introspection. I really enjoyed it, Sas. Plus, the way you ended it, I just know we'll get a sequel (don't you just love whoever invented nagging???? ) Really liked it, Sas. Now, on to that sequel  Cris
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First of all; I’m soooooooooooooooo sorry it took me so long to respond. My Internet connection has been horribly unsteady recently, and this is just the second time this week I’ve gotten it working properly, and the first I’ve had a few minutes, so... Oh man, Sas. I should have known, when you suddenly out of the blue asked me to remind you what my favourite SG songs were, that you had more in that evil little head of yours than just plain ole curiosity <g> And WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn’t think you liked me so much as to include that little sentence, those few words that would make a good fic great for me, but you did... That was it then, she figured. Lois Lane was now officially married to Lex Luthor. *gasp*!! See, I was feeling so nice and safe and loved. And thinking “She can’t possibly do it. No way. It would just be mean.” And then... gasp!! YOU DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No way!!!!!!!!!!!!! But major {{{hugs}}} anyway, sis. You totally made my day. Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!! Sara 
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I intended this to be a short response, since I really don't have much time on my hands for the next week or so. But I'm fed up with what I'm doing, I'm on a break (my own personal strike <g>) and am taking the time a nice response. I owe you guys that much for having pulled me through a hard week with this fantastic feedback! A great story but very evil! Evil, me?? Now where did I imply that? Okay, I may have been influenced by my
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I never posted a comment because I was truly left speechless and dumbfounded by sheer devestating hopeless after reading this story. Kudos! You had me totally fooled! I tremble as I anticipate the sequel: what will you do to your poor readers next? 
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Oh, Sas, you evil, evil thing!!!!! I loved Lois's introspection, very well done. But oh, boy, you better get back here and fix this mess right now. Clark was just gone...
Gone!
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I'm so sorry! I didn't spot your fantastic comments until yesterday, Jill!  I can't believe I never saw it before.  My only excuse is that I've been so busy that I hardly checked the fanfic folders. But I've read it now and I can't thank you enough for it! But punishment? I deserve *punishment*? *thud* Well okay, if you insist... I like ficusses. But if you do that, who's going to write the sequel? Ethnica, thank you for your comments as well. It means a lot to me to hear you say how the story made you feel. And I'm slowly working on the sequel - as long as Jill leaves me alone, that is . The idea for it is really starting to make sense. Saskia
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Was that the end? It couldn't have been.  Get that muse outa hock, Lady. Seriously, it showed great promise to be so much more.
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Oh boy, I'm being nagged! Thank you for your interest, Ethnica. I can't tell you how much that means to me since it means you actually want to see more. And there will be more. Some day. I'm slowly working on it, but my muse hasn't been co-operative lately. Only now it's returning... to work on some vignettes. I will post those soon and then get back to the sequel. Which is looking like it's going to be *long*. Add to that that I won't have much writing for the next few months, it will take a while before I can start posting. But I'll get there in the end. Sorry to keep you waiting, and I hope the wait will be worth it in the end. I can tell you the title. After many ideas, I finally settled on Summer Struggles. Coming in 2005, hopefully. Saskia (still stunned to be nagged, but working on the plea!)
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