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A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128662 03/30/04 01:52 PM
Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN Wanda Detroit OP Beat Reporter
OP Wanda Detroit Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2003 Posts: 379 BROOKLYN	(AWESOME challenge, Lynn--I had SO MUCH fun writing this! LOL) - If you don't count the heading it's 100 words exactly. -W.D. A Super Hot Drabble by Wanda Detroit rated: PG-13 _________________________ Lois sighed musically, reclining back on the rumpled satiny sheets. Her hair was spread artfully across the pillow, and her eyes burned into his, screaming come-hither, take me NOW. Clark stood over her, eying her gauzy gown that did little to conceal her exquisite flesh. His shirt was open, revealing the most incredible muscles she had ever seen. He soon joined Lois on the bed, his heart pounding with anticipation-- Clark’s voice scared her out of her wits. “What are you working on?” Lois clapped her palm over the screen. “It’s my latest novel, and NO, you cannot read it!” "He's a man. I'm a woman. Do you want me to draw you a diagram?" -Lois Lane, I've Got a Crush on You.

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128663 03/30/04 02:59 PM
Joined: Feb 2004 Posts: 56 I-hate-the-weather-Michigan It'sMeCaryn Freelance Reporter
It'sMeCaryn Freelance Reporter Joined: Feb 2004 Posts: 56 I-hate-the-weather-Michigan	Quote Lois clapped her palm over the screen. “It’s my latest novel, and NO, you cannot read it!” I can just see Lois's expression. That was good. Caryn "With words one can escape reality..."

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128664 03/31/04 12:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA C ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	lol! great punchline <g> PJ

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128665 03/31/04 03:28 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,090 Chicago USA lynnm Top Banana
lynnm Top Banana Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,090 Chicago USA	Fabulous, Wanda!! I love it! But...I want to read Lois's novel! Please? Can you finish that? You can use as many words as you want <g>. Thanks for sharing. Lynn You know that boy'd walk on water for you? Or he'd drown tryin'. -Perry White to Lois in Just Say Noah

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128666 03/31/04 05:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b... Krissie Beat Reporter
Krissie Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 484 The near side of the back of b...	What was great about this one, Wanda, was the twist at the end. I've seen things that call themselves drabbles -- and, no, I'm not going to say where I saw them! -- that are really nothing more than a couple of disjointed paragraphs, strong on atmosphere but weak on everything else. This one, though, hits all the right notes; it works really well. Nicely done! Chris

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128667 03/31/04 08:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 197 Portland, OR RetroRose Hack from Nowheresville
RetroRose Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 197 Portland, OR	Wanda, Great job! ) "Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128668 03/31/04 10:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN E EmilyH Columnist
EmilyH Columnist E Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 652 MN	That was great! I believe there's a hero in all of us that keeps us honest, gives us strength, makes us noble, and finally allows us to die with pride, even though sometimes we have to be steady and give up the thing we want the most. Even our dreams. -- Aunt May, Spider-Man 2

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128669 03/31/04 04:46 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Wanda This is great. I enjoyed it immensely. Tricia

Re: A SUPER HOT DRABBLE #128670 04/03/04 02:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Hehe Nice one. AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

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