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O-ho, the plot thickens! You've filled in the back story quite nicely -- the part about Miranda makes me a touch nervous, but it does explain a lot. And what the heck, there's only one more part, so she can't be *too* upset about things when the pheremone wears off. Can she? And so now, she goes from wanting to tease him about Superman, to realizing how he might react very badly to her knowing. Oh, what a tangled web... and how did she discover him, anyway? I can't remember if you've covered that yet or not. Roll on part 3!  PJ
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Hey Pam,
If you re-read part 1, you will see that Lois had one eye opened when he sped out of the bedroom dressed as Superman, "confirming her suspicions".
I haven't detailed yet why she was suspicious....perhaps that will come out in the final part 3?
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Oh, okay, that makes sense As for detailing the reasons why she was suspicious, I'm curious, and I'm certain Clark will want to know!  PJ
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Cute story  "Drugs? No. The closest thing I've been to being on drugs would be the new horrible perfume I had on briefly today –some woman at the Planet named Miranda was spraying it on everyone - but I didn't like it – it smelled like sweat – so I took a shower to get rid of the smell before I came over here. ...that sure explains a lot. Next part, please, Julia 
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Hi, Great part. 
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Another fun part! Well done! I love Lois's actions  For some reason, I just love the way you handle her! See ya, AnnaBtG. P.S.: One of the women already had suffered from smoke inhalation, Does this actually exist? I used it in a composition a couple of weeks ago and my English teacher said that there's no such word 
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Hmmmm....I'll check it out and let you know! Microsoft Word didn't underline it or anything (you know how annoying that can be when you spell a word wrong). Checked it out...yeah, it's definitely a word!! BTW, it's interesting, when you write a fic and do a little research for it, what you can discover! Here's an interesting link to a web site that actually sells pheromones and states that it will elevate your mood, give you more confidence, make you more popular, etc. Apparently you put several drops under your nose, above your lips and you are instantly charismatic!!! I've always said that since I started reading comics I've learned alot about science, and 40+ years later, it's still true!! Pheromone, my lovely...indeed! web page for pheromones
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Great stuff. I needed a small romantic chuckle this morning, just tore my way through parts one and two, and loved it. I guess I'll have to break down and register at the nfic forum. Yvette
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I'm enjoying this! Now give us part3! We need part 3!!!!! QotC---Who is too young to register for nfic, but is very mature for her age. Really. Honest, that wasn't *me* throwing a tantrum in the mall yesterday; it was---um...my clone! Yeah, that's it! My clone!
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Checked it out...yeah, it's definitely a word!! Too bad classes are finished... I'd love to tell her so Thanks, Chris! See ya, AnnaBtG.
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This is getting even more interesting. I can't wait to see what Lois's reaction will be once the pheremones wear off. Yeah, I agree with the others...need Part 3!!!!!  Caryn
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