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Fdk: That's All It Takes #129308 09/05/04 04:41 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken OP Top Banana
OP CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Anna, Welcome to TOGOM rewrites! You did such a nice job with this. Really captured Lois's sadness, and I thought this was particularly poignant: Quote ‘Little, simple things... was all it took. This was the way it always worked.’ Lisa mewed, as if she was trying to get Lois to understand. One little, simple thing. Just like... forgiving him? Also, you are the only author I guessed right!! Thank you! CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129309 09/05/04 05:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 244 North of Stonehenge, west of U... Meredith Hack from Nowheresville
Meredith Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 244 North of Stonehenge, west of U...	Anna, this whole story was really sweet... poor, sad Lois. At least she had a friend this time! I really liked her giving Clark a hard time for a while there before forgiving him, too - he really deserved worse, but she would only have been punishing herself, too! Lovely! Mere A diabolically, fiendishly clever mind. Possibly someone evil enough to take over the world. CC Aiken, Can You Guess the Writer? challenge

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129310 09/05/04 11:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands Saskia Top Banana
Saskia Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands	That was just so sad and sweet at the same time! Saskia I tawt I taw a puddy cat!

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129311 09/07/04 02:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,571 Third star to the right and st... HatMan Pulitzer
HatMan Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,571 Third star to the right and st...	That was sweet, Anna. And that's one smart talking cat! Nice story. Paul When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129312 09/09/04 07:41 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	This was lovely, Anna - as CC noted, very poignant. Poor Lois. What an original idea, having her looking for a replacement for Clark. And, you know, for TOGOM fic that ain't easy these days. Quote Lois sniffed and stared at Lisa for a moment. Her new friend. Almost lost it entirely at this point. Huge lump in throat and could feel the tears welling up in my eyes. But she got a happy ending. (What were the odds? <G>) and we moved from poignant to waffy. Wonderful. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129313 09/10/04 07:41 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Anna A wonderful story! Tricia

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129314 09/11/04 11:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Thanks for the comments, CC, Mere, Saskia, Paul, LabRat and Tricia! I'm glad you enjoyed this story. See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: Fdk: That's All It Takes #129315 09/12/04 11:50 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	Hehehe. I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

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