Woo-hoo! Sarah's back, and she's
writing! This is a really fun story. I love the little touches and throwaway lines and odd bits of humor, and even more, I love how they come together.
I'm a bit confused about how the cat knew where the Planet building was, but hey.. it's funny.
As for where this should go... I have no idea. A rescue, some hugging, possibly another step in a vaguely b-plot direction, something bad happening to the bad guys, and something happening with the cat. That about covers the loose ends, I think, but as for what should happen to those loose ends, I think you're the only one who can say. The story won't be nearly as fun any other way.
So... looking forward to seeing what you end up doing.
Sarah's writing! Sarah's writing! Sarah's writing!
Paul, who had a long day and is slowly making less and less sense.