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Hi, Great little piece.  Lois that didn't hurt much. :rolleyes: The worse part is going to be her mother. Lois continued to stare in confusion.
"Maybe I should just show you." Clark rose to his feet and stood in front of her. He removed his glasses and laid them on the coffee table. Then, he began to spin. When he finally stopped, he stood before her in full Superman regalia. As he watched, Lois' confused stare gradually turned into one of shock and realization.
The last thing he saw was Lois' fist. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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I've been sitting at the edge of my seat this entire story, on this part I almost literally fell off. Please post more soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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 Go for it, girl! We have seen Lois shocked, in tears, angry, even slapping Clark in the show, but I never read about a fist coming!  (or I missed it in some fic?) Simona 
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One "Daddy's Girl" to another: That's the one man you know won't steer you wrong. Thank Pops for me.  Loved it. Her floating, his 'revelation,' her FIST!  I sat on the edge of my chair, first grinning, then laughing out loud. My fist pumped into the air and I actually shouted 'Yeah, baby! Go, Lois! Go, Lois!' Mary, it was worth the wait. 
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I love this Lois. She's so fiesty, and now with superpowers, she can take out her anger on Clark and he'll actually feel it. Not just emotionally.
Ooh, it's exciting.
Three cheers for the Muse!
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, Mary! Keep it up! Wherever you decide to go next, I'm sure I'll like it. See ya, AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would like to see the next part soon.
I love all your fic....
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Clark's eyebrows raced to the top of his head. *My* eyebrows raced to the top of my head when she finally admitted it! "Maybe I should just show you." Clark rose to his feet and stood in front of her. He removed his glasses and laid them on the coffee table. Then, he began to spin. When he finally stopped, he stood before her in full Superman regalia. As he watched, Lois' confused stare gradually turned into one of shock and realization.
The last thing he saw was Lois' fist. Oh, hell's bells. Here we go. It was going to come out sooner or later... JD
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LOL!!!
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The last thing he saw was Lois' fist. ROFLMAO!!!!!!LOLOLOLOLOL I wish you had been writing for the show, I would have sooooo loved to have seen this happen TEEEEEEEEJ
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Gee wiz. I just spent the past forty five minutes getting caught up and now I have no more to read! Just as well, I have to be up in six hours. No...I want more! Sleep is soo over-rated. I need more! HEHEHE I love the way you left us. I do hope to read more soon. PLEASE!!!! Please times a million!!! ... plus one. Loved how Lucy messed it up. I was surprised though. Ah, who cares b/c it lead up to a fantasic upheaval at The Planet. The fist in the face... loved it! <Go to sleep Roo> Oh all right...grumble.
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We are still waiting for the next part!
Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Pleeeeease may I have some more fic pleeeeease for the love of cheese.
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We're not too proud to beg. 
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<clears throat> .... . . . . . ........ HELLO? R U OK?? . . . Hope you are.  B/c I love your story. nag nag nag  nag nag I WANT MORE!!!  plueeeeeeeeeeeeease
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Um, hi.  Hopefully my muse will be more cooperative once I finish my report, which is due tomorrow... .P.S. I'm really glad you guys like this story!
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 I'm impatient!! Rach
Me: what are you looking at *Snatches pic* OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?!
Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate!
Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate!
Sara: LMAO the *chocolate* isn't smeared in chocolate!
Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate
Sara: ROTFLMAO
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