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FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129923 07/12/05 03:23 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek OP Pulitzer
OP Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	First part: Too WAFFy!! (Laura must be proud of you ) Second part: Evil!! Just when I started believing you wouldn't twist this one, after all! See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129924 07/12/05 07:49 AM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,578 Likes: 10 Brazil - RS	An evil WAFFy... "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129925 07/12/05 01:20 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370 J Julia Beat Reporter
Julia Beat Reporter J Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 370	ROTFLOL!!!!!!!!

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129926 07/12/05 08:36 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA Psychofurball Columnist
Psychofurball Columnist Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 552 Davenport, IA	Omg! LOL!! Nice erica. I was wondering what you were up to. Rach Me: what are you looking at Snatches pic OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the chocolate isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129927 07/13/05 06:56 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,133 Y YellowDartVader Top Banana
YellowDartVader Top Banana Y Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,133	I like the story if I read it is . . . Quote In the middle of a storm, the secret was revealed and the mistakes forgiven. Sure there would be a better time for explanations and little fights, but the obvious was standing right there on the Centennial Park and everyone who passed by could see it – Lois and Clark were in love and nothing could stop them from being happy ever after. THE END This part was beautiful. Kissing. Happy revelations. Beautiful. I'll admit, I am not a fan of the second part of the story. First, that wasn't the challenge! You just wanted to get out of writing WAFFy . I really don't like self-insertion -- sorry! Also, there are some factual errors. I despise history with every bone in my body -- especially when I was little. Also, my mom is a math teacher, and I've always loved math and always been good at it . EDIT: Mary, she wasn't talking about you. My mom's name is Mary. - Laura Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive) "A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129928 07/13/05 10:59 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Ah, well; I guess it's just literary liscence. Good one, Erica! EDIT: You're Mom is Mary too, eh? Ah. That explains it. ~•~

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129929 07/13/05 01:55 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Hey guys, Thanks for the comments. Quote I really don't like self-insertion -- sorry! Also, there are some factual errors. I'm sorry you feel this way, Laura, but I told you to read before I posted. It is not my fault that you didn't take the time to do so though I must admit I had the best intentions with it, and I am very disappointed that you didn't like it. I respect your opinion and promise it won't be done again. The Waffy story had a good ending and i did exatly what i was told : a waffy story about Lois and Clark. It was 'literally' a story inside the story also following my personal style - to create twisted endings. Again I am sorry it is not appreciated by everybody, but I won't change it anyway. Only when and if I want too. Thanks for all the comments - the good and the bad ones. I really like when people take the time to say that my story is great or that it sucks. Makes me feel really happy when you guys do it. Other comments are always welcome. MDL. "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

Re: FDK: Once Upon a Time... there was WAFFy #129930 07/19/05 08:29 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 280 Lima, Peru Carolyn Hack from Nowheresville
Carolyn Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 280 Lima, Peru	If you insist MDL I'll add my comments Actually I didn't dislike the ending, sometimes it's nice reading how L&C story it's part of history and learning new things about fellows folcs (it's a pity Laura doesn't likes self-insertions ) MDL, now that you tried writing WAFFy, you could keep at it and perfection it (sp?) Carolyn Pisco and Ceviche ->100% PERUVIAN. Never doubt that.

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