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#129973 08/04/05 05:43 PM
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Aww! I loved it!! I always thought it probably happened a little something like that too.

I especially loved those last couple of paragraphs to tie it in to what we saw on the show. It really looked liek that's exactly what he was thinking! clap

Thanks for the great read!!

~Anna

#129974 08/04/05 07:16 PM
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Really nice, Sarah! Like Anna, I especially liked the final section, where you showed him taking off the glasses again as Superman - bringing it full circle.

You should write these short ones more often! thumbsup


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#129975 08/05/05 04:38 AM
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cute

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Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#129976 08/05/05 11:53 PM
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A lovely story! smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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#129977 08/06/05 11:58 AM
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Love it! It's great! Excellent idea thumbsup

Keep writing!
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What we've got here is failure to communicate...
#129978 08/06/05 02:01 PM
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Excellent!!!!! party


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#129979 08/07/05 12:10 PM
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Well I liked the story but I especially liked the end when he stands a little taller and becomes free to be himself the Superhero. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#129980 08/08/05 03:28 PM
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Nice story, as everyone else I loved the end: the simbolism around the glasses makes it very special.

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#129981 08/09/05 02:11 PM
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Thanks for your comments! I'm glad everybody liked the last little section. That was the part I wasn't sure about, because it's very different in tone from the rest of the story. But I liked it, so I left it in, and now I'm glad I did! Thanks again!

#129982 08/09/05 11:13 PM
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It was really nice!

I also especially loved the last part. (Btw. Meerkat, why that name, I thought Meerkat was only an Afrikaans word, sorry, I'm interested smile )

Once again really well done, I loved it.

(Newbie alert!)

#129983 08/17/05 12:03 PM
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Awwwwwww smile

keep penning,
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