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Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130153 12/13/05 01:50 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes OP Pulitzer
OP Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	MDL, This was great! ~•~

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130154 12/14/05 08:41 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Woohoo! How delightful to see you back with your NLTVs, Erica! We've missed those. Remember to send it along to the Archive, you hear? LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130155 12/15/05 06:27 AM
Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico Karla Kent Columnist
Karla Kent Columnist Joined: Oct 2004 Posts: 509 Mexico	wow Erica, I love it. I am glad you posted this fic. Karla My journal: http://charmingkarla.livejournal.com/

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130156 12/15/05 09:26 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California Nicole S Beat Reporter
Nicole S Beat Reporter Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 451 Burbank, California	Quote With a snort, she saw perry leaving, singing a carol. "On the first day of christmas, my true boss sent to me, an alluminum tree..." This was so cute, Erica! I had five golden grins on my face the whole time! Nicole~

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130157 12/15/05 05:08 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Lol very cute. Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130158 12/18/05 02:26 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	It was a nice story. As Nicole said, Perry's lyrics to Twelve Days of Christmas was a good laugh I liked how you put everything in and, while there were some mistakes here and there, the story flowed well. Good job! Hope to see more of your writing soon. Anna What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: Awwwwww! Or FDK: Five Golden Grins #130159 12/18/05 05:30 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil Mad Dog Lane Features Writer
Mad Dog Lane Features Writer Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 845 Rio de Janeiro - Brazil	Thanks for the replies girls. I've forgotten how good it is to write and how good it is to wait for feedback later. Revising the story, I could see loads of mistakes, but as I said I had only 30 minutes to make it during my break time from work. But I'll try to correct them before sending to a BR. By the time it reaches Labby's hand, I hope it will be okay The lyrics of the song were a bit longer... Where Perry actually sung until the fifth item that would be five golden grins "On the first of Christmas my true boss sent to me.. an alluminium tree. On the second day of Christmas my true boss sent to me, two purple gloves and ... an alluminium tree. On third day of Christmas my true boss sent to me three strange pans, two purple gloves and... an alluminium tree. On the fourth day of Christmas my true boss sent to me four awful notes, three strange pans, two purple gloves and... an alluminium tree. On the fifth day of Christmas my true boss sent to me... five golden grins... four awful notes, three strange pans, two purple gloves and an alluminium tree." But that would be too much thanks for the support, notes, and grins. I hope you all have a great Xmas and a wonderful New Year! MDL - counting down the days for her own birthday "Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."

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