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A cute story so far, but I have a ?

"“This is SOOOO cool!” She shouted, “Oh, Clark, this is SOOO amazing!”


is this a slip on Lois's part, un-recognized?

doublel

I think that's part of the story that was copied from Touring Clark's World...where Lois knows Clark is Superman.

Easily fixed.

Yes, this works well in this story, where Superman/Kal/Clark is trying to "humanize" the icon, Superman...bringing her closer to Clark.

So did you can the whole idea of Superman and Clark sharing the apartment? I think it was originally in part 3....which you changed...

Chapters are coming fast & furious, for sure!

Are you going to make the whole story available (with all the adjustments) when you are finished posting? I would like to read it, but I got a bit lost. Maybe knowing what is what would help this gal out. I feel silly asking.

From what I have read I love it.

I like the story a lot!

But two things...

don't post parts so quickly... even I have problems to read them!! You'll get more readers if you leave some time to read the parts... and it would allow you to have a buffer.

Edit the post instead of reposting again, please... it's better, sometimes I don't know which post to read. Howver if you send the story to the Archive there people will be able to read the definitive version, so don't worry if people don't see the edits.

Jose

Nancy

I'm glad that you made the changes to the previous parts.

Tricia

This is so great to have immediate responses! Sigh.

The clark on the surfboard is a mistake, I'll go back and fix that.

No, Superman is still going to live with Clark.

Yes, he wore the cape in the water. They've not been seen, as it's an isolated place.

The Mexican restaurant is also a private place, however i have plans for them being seen! I think it's going to be okay. He was photographed buying flowers in Holland. grin. This is so fun.

Read the corrected versions if there are any. I have been changing it in the posts so there are no longer ones that are wrong.

Too bad it's spring, otherwise he wants to take her to see the butterflies on the mountain! darn limitations!

I've been doing nothing but writing this story for the past three days. I had no idea how fun it was to become totally submersed in writing romantic fiction! I don't usually! (www.travelwriters.com/nancyvsont)

Good changes, Ok more soon. Laura

Hi,

Interesting.

Is this woman so blind she don't see Clark is talking clear. Maybe if he put sign on his head she'll get it.

More ASAP, please.

MAF :rolleyes: