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Hey gr8shades,

I'm glad that you've posted this, I really enjoyed it

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Since I just luuuuurve LnC's stakeout in The Phoenix, I have quite a good guess for this one.

You mention that your 'character' is working "undercover mostly" and with the last lines ("My broken body falling lifeless to the floor") I think it has to be that poor light bulb Clark 'kills' to distract Lois

I also want to say that you did a great job.

This is so well written, I hope you will post a fic soon - I would absolutely love to read it

Thanks for resurrecting this idea, hopefully a few others will join in

Best,

Eva

I have have to concur with Eva on this one

Michael

Gr8shades, I'm very proud of myself because this is the first story of this kind where I've actually managed to guess who the narrator is!

This was really cute. I especially liked the line about the lightbulb's job not being what we were thinking.

Okay I suck. I totally couldn't think of who it was. For some reason I was thinking a rat but I didn't remember a rat getting "blown away." But after reading Eva's genius response, I agree.

It was the light bulb.

I tweaked this a bit last evening to make it (hopefully) better.

Eva, I’d love to post a fic, I just need an original idea and a whole lot of perseverance, because, and don’t tell anyone this, I do actually have the time. I’m in awe of people who can produce long, multi-part stories. I think vignettes are about my limit.

Thanks everyone. And yes, it was the ‘one defective bulb’.

I didn't remember that either, which is good because I don't think I'd have gotten over the trauma of seeing LNC turn into a Tarantino bloodbath for rodent viewers...

Cute idea to make it the lightbulb, Eva - I don't know how you guys come up with these.

LabRat

Okay, I'm guessing before I check what others have said. I'm guessing the light bulb in the lamp on the yacht when Lois and Clark had their almost first date.

And, by the way, I loved the story.