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so, thoughts?

and yes, it said "curtain call." yes, there is a part 4. it'll become clear when you see part 4.

part 3

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Paul

Ah, it's beginning to unravel... <rubs hands together gleefully> Cool!

And I like that Amy has shown herself to NOT be a stereotypical (read: dumb) actress-wannabe. She gives insightful advice!

And Nick's play made me <snarf>! I don't know how well this:
would work when spoken, though. Might be hard to understand? Otherwise, I quite like the play-within-the-play.

thanks for the comments, rivka.

glad you're seeing more in amy. the play is short enough that i don't get into any of the characters very deeply, so it's good to know that things are coming through.

very glad you liked nick's script. i just tossed together a lot of fun and random ideas, so it's good to hear they work.

as for the acronym playing out loud... good point. that actually hadn't occured to me before. the people in my playwriting class had a bit of trouble pronouncing it, but somehow i'd forgotten that the audience wouldn't be seeing it. i'll have to think about that.

anyway, thanks again for your comments. part 4 coming right up.