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#137574 05/29/03 06:53 AM
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Dude that needs some FDK. That was a really pretty poem.

Nice job
Jen
(who really needs to remember to dig up some of her old poetry to distract people from her unfinished fics)


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#137575 05/30/03 09:35 AM
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Wow, Emily!

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I felt captured in a sort of whirlpool. Very nice! smile1


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#137576 05/30/03 11:00 AM
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Thanks!


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#137577 05/30/03 08:09 PM
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yeah, I just wanted to add that I loved your poem. It's great how you use all those words for moving liquids...It gives your poem a special touch.
Excellent work!
~Sira

#137578 05/31/03 12:35 AM
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Well, at least I'm not parroting Elena, this time. goofy

But...what they all said. wink

More of what's becoming your trademark lyrical detail, Emily - beautifully evocative. Thanks for sharing. smile

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#137579 05/31/03 06:02 PM
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Emily

A wonderful poem! Very lyrical! smile1 smile1

Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed it immensely. jump

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Thanks, I'm glad you all enjoyed it. blush


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