Yeah, yeah... a lot of good that beta-reading did, look at all these mistakes I found, ones I *told* you to fix!!
Sas, I'm so amazed by your writing, you're better than a lot of native speakers I know!!! Not to mention I'm impressed that you can come up with something original. My muse hasn't done that in I don't know how long.
You're a terrific writer and I can't wait to see more from you, whether it be original or L&C.
Thanks for letting me be one of the first to see it!!
Sara (who will probably come back with real comments after she finishes something she was *supposed* to have finished by now
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