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Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138038 11/23/04 10:39 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada Phoenix Rising OP Freelance Reporter
OP Phoenix Rising Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada	Not exactly a plot movement, but it does start the ball rolling. If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

Re: Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138039 11/23/04 12:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada IreneD Columnist
IreneD Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada	Poor Nakomii. You made me feel very sorry for him. But this is not a chapter. It's too short for a chapter. It's just a couple of transition scenes. So now I'm going to wait (im)patiently for the real Chapter 4. love, Mom I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

Re: Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138040 11/23/04 08:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,099 Chatellerault, France, Europea... Kaethel Top Banana
Kaethel Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,099 Chatellerault, France, Europea...	Just a short post to say I'm still around, but I haven't had time to catch up on part 3 and 4 yet. I will, though, and I'll post comments when I'm caught up. In the meantime, what are you doing here, Phoenix? You should be busy writing! Slavedriv... er... Kaethel - I'm your partner. I'm your friend. - Is that what we are? - Oh, you know what? I don't know what we are. We kiss and then we never talk about it. We nearly die frozen in each other's arms, but we never talk about it, so no, I got no clue what we are. ~ Rick Castle and Kate Beckett ~ Knockout ~

Re: Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138041 11/24/04 02:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Yeah, I'm with PU(F) here, Phoenix; this isn't Chapter Four at all. You're trying to fool us here and failing badly! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138042 11/24/04 02:44 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada Phoenix Rising OP Freelance Reporter
OP Phoenix Rising Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada	::growls:: It IS chapter four! The sceens I wanted to put in woulda made it too long for chapter four, and the one's I put up were the only ones that could be split apart from the main mass! (Mom, in answer to your question from last night, again... (I NEED SLEEP!), there's a difference between seeing and actually meeting. Dekani will run up a tree sometime soon.) By the way, chapter FIVE will be up soon. Maybe today or tomorrow if I can stay awake long enough. Hrmph! If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

Re: Dementia Chapter Four Comments #138043 11/24/04 04:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	There's no such thing as an over-long chapter, Phoenix... People usually post around 10 pages at a time, so don't worry that you might be putting up too much. Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

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