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Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138243 05/10/05 09:39 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada Phoenix Rising OP Freelance Reporter
OP Phoenix Rising Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada	::Does the happy-dance:: YEAH! Chapter Fifteen is UP! And things get even more interesting after this, because hey! Dekani has a plan and no one is happy 'cept her, methinks. Nakomii= If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

Re: Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138244 05/10/05 10:05 AM
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LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Awwwwww, thanks, sweetie. It's certainly no hard chore reading over your story! I loved the dragon romance in this segment and thought that you did a perfect job with the healing confusion. As you could probably tell from my comments. Poor Dekani. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138245 05/10/05 02:26 PM
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IreneD Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 699 Ontario, Canada	Very powerful installment, Kathleen. It's very well written, but all the same, I found it a bit disturbing. And I'm confused by the dream, too. I'm voting for Gyren. love, Mom I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

Re: Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138246 05/11/05 08:17 AM
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OP Phoenix Rising Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada	YES! Confusion of dream sequence! HA! You're supposed to be, mom. It'll become clearer a ways down the road. Hn. M-gan or Gy-ren? M-gan or Gy-ren... M-gan is easier to write, but Gy-ren sounds cool... ::Starts pacing:: Poor Deka might end up with a fellow named Hawk if I can't figure this out... If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

Re: Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138247 05/11/05 10:30 AM
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Xanabee Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 454 The Netherlands	Poor, poor Dekani! I totally understand her reaction to the dragon's 'healing'. On the bright side, I'm glad you have a mate for her in store. She'll need someone to help her hunt, won't she? I vote for Gy-ren. It has a nice sound to it. Oh, and I'm really happy for Nakomii! He never thought a female dragon would ever be interested in him and look at him now. Great developments, can't wait for the next part. EDITED CORRECT NAME DRAGON Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique. Clark: You certainly are unique. Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that? Lois: But I'm worth it!

Re: Dementia Chapter Fifteen Comments #138248 05/12/05 08:29 AM
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OP Phoenix Rising Freelance Reporter Joined: May 2003 Posts: 92 Ontario, Canada	Xanabee... ::Gives her a weird look:: Don't you mean Nakomii? Not Dekani? Dekani is female, two-legger, and, um... Nakomii is the one who got the mate, after all. Heh, yeah, I was going for that. Confusion, misunderstandings, so on and so forth. Now, to work on the next chapter! ((I don't know if I'm half , more then half or less then half done. WE SHALL SEE! But it gets more exciting! Nya.)) If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::

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