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Ah, once again LabRat has managed to make life, or my story, less confusing for you readers. Sometimes I forget that not everyone has the inside information. wink I ended up adding two small scenes that would explain a few... questions. And a few things I left, because they should be explained next chapter. Or not... you have to leave a few loose ties to clear up, like Sabriel's apparent emotionlessness.

Oh, and the word 'hn' is sort of like humming through your nose, an irritated or unimpressed sound. I made it up. If you say it, it sounds like a polite snort. In my oppinion, anyway.

Griffin is not gone, he's just... away for a bit. He'll be back... maybe soon, maybe not... By the way, one of the genres here seems to be romance... how did that happen? shock


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Interesting. I like this a lot. I like the first person story-telling in this case, although I don't always like that style of story.

And I'm glad to hear that Griffin will be back; I like him! I suspect Sabriel does also. smile

Looking forward to more.
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WOW! This is very intriguing. smile1

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Erm... ::head slams down onto desk:: I warn you, chapter three isn't going to be as exciting as this one... maybe... Alas, poor Sabriel is going to be shoved into the deep end. Sink or swim time, and things are going to explode! ::Maniacal laughter:: ::Shifty eyes:: ::Runs off::


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