Still fascinating, Kathleen! I like that she's thinking about Griffin. Thinking about him a lot.
One thing I do wonder about. She's been introduced to this whole new life, a world she's never known about, a
family she never knew existed. She's meeting a woman she's been told is her mother... but she already has a family, a mother. So how does she feel about the idea that this is her real family? What about her own family, the mother who brought her up? Choosing furnishings for her new rooms... does she remember her room at home and feel nostalgic for it?
It's quite a change Sabriel's experiencing, and I could certainly see her having problems reconciling it with her normal life. Does she see this as her life from now on, or is the thought continually in her mind that any minute now she'll wake up and be home in her own bed? Or that whenever she decides she's had enough she's going to ask Griffin to take her home?
More soon! Keep up the great writing.
Wendy
: And mom, of course I did a lot of the work! I... uh... Actually, I'm not to clear on WHAT I did...