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Betwixt Comments Five
#138474 12/05/05 04:11 PM
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Well, I've gone and done it again. ::sighs:: I just HAD to listen to my muse... ::shakes head:: Not like I had a choice in the matter. She grabbed the back of my head and slammed it into the keyboard... somehow, these 'word' things appeared on the screen. They made a slight logical sense, so I sent the chapter off to Lab Rat.

So, does it sink, or swim? ::arches an eyebrow::

If I can't be a good example, I'll just have to settle for being a horrible warning. ::Shifty Eyes::
Re: Betwixt Comments Five
#138475 12/05/05 06:38 PM
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It very much swims for me, but then I'm your mother and I'm prejudiced! wink

I would like to see the part about the reasons for Sabriel's separation from Griffin drawn out a little bit more. It's a great reason for keeping her separate from him, though.

Good job!

More!!

love,
Mom smile

I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.

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