Rampant Reporter, that's an interesting start. I'd love to read the rest of this story.
But it would be easier to follow if you'd take the time to divide the text in paragraphs, add dots and comma's in the right places, etc. The way it's posted, it's hard to read. Especially for non-English FoLCs like myself.
Maybe you could ask a beta reader to help you out on grammar and such. Check out the 'Willing BR's looking for work' thread in the 'Fanfic related' folder.
Ursie
Edited to include part no. in header - LabRat
