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WOW! Your muse must be working overtime for you to come up with this one! 
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Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
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First off - comments: Well written but...I'm just really not sure what to say. I agree with ethnica, you can't stop there.
Second - My guess...well, Wendy's done this sort of thing before...and you did say 'pounds' not dollars. Though, that could be just to throw us off.
Sara (who's interested in finding out who this is, but more intrigued to find out what the heck CJ was thinking)
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Columnist
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i'm guessing that I'm not supposed to believe that it was CJ doing the protesting?
Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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It's certainly not Wendy, or anyone British - not with "gotten" and "dove". So "pounds" is a red herring.  Having said that... nice teaser, where's the story?  Mere
A diabolically, fiendishly clever mind. Possibly someone evil enough to take over the world. CC Aiken, Can You Guess the Writer? challenge
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Top Banana
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...and what about this: As he flew, his super hearing picked up an argument going on inside a car parked at lookout point. It was too teenagers, a boy and a girl. ? Is that terminology for a kind of place in your average American town or an actual place name, in which case someone forgot to capitalise it...  And it should be two teenagers, of course. Yvonne
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great little story. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Pulitzer
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Ooh, a mystery!!! This is cool! Post more! Post more!  As for who it is...well, this doesn't exactly strike me as being fluff, so do you think maybe it's Tank or Evil El or even Yvonne? I know Tank hates kids, so maybe he's trying to demonstrate why L&C having kids wouldn't work? Just a thought. 
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Not Tank, trust me. Tank doesn't write stories that involve kids.
Tank (who thinks that children are evil enough in themselves by just existing)
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Features Writer
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he could see the young man's face all too clearly. "CJ?" CJ stands for Clark Junior??? Come on!!! Give us some more!!
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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I agree with Mere.... nice and evil teaser but this premise needs to be developed!!!  Jose 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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