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#13909 07/18/04 07:43 AM
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WOW! Your muse must be working overtime for you to come up with this one! thumbsup

#13910 07/18/04 07:47 AM
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First off - comments: Well written but...I'm just really not sure what to say. I agree with ethnica, you can't stop there.

Second - My guess...well, Wendy's done this sort of thing before...and you did say 'pounds' not dollars. Though, that could be just to throw us off.

Sara (who's interested in finding out who this is, but more intrigued to find out what the heck CJ was thinking)


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#13911 07/18/04 08:45 AM
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i'm guessing that I'm not supposed to believe that it was CJ doing the protesting?


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#13912 07/18/04 09:00 AM
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It's certainly not Wendy, or anyone British - not with "gotten" and "dove". So "pounds" is a red herring. smile

Having said that... nice teaser, where's the story? laugh

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#13913 07/18/04 09:16 AM
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...and what about this:

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As he flew, his super hearing picked up an argument going on inside a car parked at lookout point. It was too teenagers, a boy and a girl.
lookout point? Is that terminology for a kind of place in your average American town or an actual place name, in which case someone forgot to capitalise it... wink

And it should be two teenagers, of course. laugh

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#13914 07/18/04 09:21 AM
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Hi,

Great little story. smile1


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#13915 07/18/04 09:23 AM
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Ooh, a mystery!!! smile1

This is cool! Post more! Post more! wildguy

As for who it is...well, this doesn't exactly strike me as being fluff, so do you think maybe it's Tank or Evil El or even Yvonne?

I know Tank hates kids, so maybe he's trying to demonstrate why L&C having kids wouldn't work?

Just a thought. cool


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Not Tank, trust me. Tank doesn't write stories that involve kids.

Tank (who thinks that children are evil enough in themselves by just existing)

#13917 07/18/04 06:37 PM
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he could see the young man's face all too clearly. "CJ?"
CJ stands for Clark Junior??? Come on!!! Give us some more!! smile1


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#13918 07/18/04 06:38 PM
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I agree with Mere.... nice and evil teaser but this premise needs to be developed!!! grumble

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