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FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) #139312 07/19/11 09:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Please post feedback here. Thank you. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) #139313 08/04/11 12:00 PM
Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 23 England M Mpj891 Blogger
Mpj891 Blogger M Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 23 England	I thought it was very good a nice story is there going to be any more or was it a one off ? All the best Mpj

Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) #139314 08/04/11 12:24 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR OP Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Mpj: Thank you for the comment. And welcome to the Boards! Originally I wrote this as a description as how my character Jones Porter became Jones MacEntosh (how she met Agent MacEntosh - her husband). I was trying to write a mystery novel, but it never panned out (Plot A never being my strong suit), but the short story remained. Maybe someday I'll pick up my Jones mystery story and complete it as it is already plotted out in my head. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK - Scavenger Hunt (1/1) #139315 08/04/11 11:12 PM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	I thought this was a really good little story! I liked it- characters were easily likable, and holds promise for future expansion if you so choose... Especially liked Agent MacEntosh's flirty, never-give-up style! Good job! Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

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