Originally posted by Mouserocks:
Cute, WAFFy little tale! I liked it. I see where you diverged from it with thw LnC version~ probably best, too, since I cant quite see Perry making Lois read Clark her dreams without sustaining some damage.
Good job, though! Lots of fun & worked alone Thank you. I always liked this story. (Probably because I never got the courage to tell my crush how much I liked him... hence why disclosure is so prominent / important in my stories. The what-if quality of non-closure is torture.)
No, Perry making her share her dreams with the bullpen
was never a consideration for
Once Upon A Dream..., I was going more for the what if Clark discovered Lois liked him by accidentally reading her dream journal. But then you throw in Superman and how Clark would feel guilty over reading Lois's private journal, etc.
It wasn't a perfect fit, but I think I scraped together a decent story with some laughs at least.