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I know this chapter seems terribly huge, but we tried to separate the story into sections that were mostly the same theme. We've also tried to name them appropriately. There might come a time when we'll have to divide chapters, but for now, enjoy a really large story section!
SQD
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Features Writer
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SQD, Jenny  MDL. 
"Work while you have the light. You are responsible for the talent that has been entrusted to you."
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Pulitzer
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Hi, Great part.  "Okay!" Marching into the living room, Lois grabbed her bag and jacket. "Meet me at Star Labs in the morning and we'll see if Dr Klein has anything new." She ran lightly up the stairs but paused on the landing. "Oh, and Clark, try to get some sleep, 'cause I have to tell you, you look awful."
Then she was gone and he was left smiling as the door closed behind the tornado that was Lois Lane. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Top Banana
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I have no words, I'm a weeping mess. Perfect.  Simona 
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Pulitzer
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Whew, thank heavens the cat's out of the bag...all of them for that matter. It was starting to be a tight squeeze for all those animals. :p I knew his illness was going to be obvious in both personas. At least now he and Lois can tackle this thing together! JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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I am relieved that Lois knows. Though the fun part is waiting for that. This is so painful. I can hardly wait for the next part....like MDL says....TODAY???? 
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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Pulitzer
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SQD & Jenni I've just read the first two parts.  Tricia 
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And now what?  Martha and Jonathan will be happy that Lois knows Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Hack from Nowheresville
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Great Part! Loved that Perry, Jimmy and Lois know! Loved the revelation!  Ingra
Clark: What is that?
Lois: It's my word.
Clark: There is no such word.
Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy.
Clark: Try again.
Lois: Are you challenging me?
Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.
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