Ha! It's so neat to see people be in suspense over something i'm writing. YOu know, this whole thing jsut began because i always wanted to see what would happen if Lois fell when they were in the clouds. So of course, the rest of the story has followed along. I like the way it's coming. I'm way ahead of here in my writing, so it does get quite good, i must say myself. But i think i was reading too much Alt-Clark stories because he really wasn't acting like the proper Clark, but then red kryptonite can be the reason for that! I thought this was going to be a really short story when i started, but low and behold, it's got a life of its own. I can barely wait to see what happens!