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COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14988 08/26/04 04:20 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank OP Merriwether
OP Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Okay, I said I would post in August and I have. I'm going to be sorry I did, but there you have it. Knowing that I'm going to be quite busy over the next month getting ready for our convention, I'm not sure how much writing I'm going to be able to do. I hope that my buffer lasts longer than Yvonne's did. I will start out with a once a week posting schedule with the possibility of posting 'bonus' chapters if I have a good week of writing. (Ha! fat chance!) If you wish to make a comment on my last story before retirement, you can do so here. Tank (who says he doesn't have a subtitle for this sequel yet and would be happy to entertain any suggestions from the gentle readers)

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14989 08/26/04 09:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland Jenni Debb Columnist
Jenni Debb Columnist Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 605 Scotland	Hi Tank, Very interesting beginning. You've certainly caught my attention. I enjoyed 'Protect & Serve l' and this story looks every bit as gripping. I look forward to reading how Lois and Clark's relationship unfolds in this 'world'. And I do hope that Henderson finds a way out of his dilemma. Yours Jenni

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14990 08/26/04 10:16 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil Ingra Hack from Nowheresville
Ingra Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 118 Brazil	Great Start! Ingra Clark: What is that? Lois: It's my word. Clark: There is no such word. Lois: Sure there is. Someone's a chump, therefore, he's chumpy. Clark: Try again. Lois: Are you challenging me? Clark: You bet your sweet little chumpy I am.

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14991 08/26/04 11:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Yippiie!! "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14992 08/27/04 03:31 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 430 CA A Aria Beat Reporter
Aria Beat Reporter A Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 430 CA	Glad to see this being posted! I just recently read the first one in the series and I loved it. I can't wait to see where you take this one -- you definitely have my attention Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, The courage to change the things I can, And the wisdom to know the difference.

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14993 08/27/04 05:30 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 515 The Big Apple R Rac Columnist
Rac Columnist R Joined: May 2003 Posts: 515 The Big Apple	Great start, Tank! I love how you've made Henderson cross an ethical line without turning him into a mustache twirling bad guy. Shades of gray are just so intriguing. I'm anxiously awaiting more! Rac

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14994 08/27/04 05:34 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands Saskia Top Banana
Saskia Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,202 the Netherlands	A very intriguing start. One that says lots of angst, whams and unexpected plot twists. Really looking forward to more. Saskia (somehow regretting she added another wip to her list while she knows she won't be able to keep up with anything soon... ah well, good writers ) I tawt I taw a puddy cat!

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14995 08/27/04 09:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. Pulitzer
mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great start. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14996 08/27/04 10:15 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut ChaaBreh Top Banana
ChaaBreh Top Banana Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,269 Connecticut	Hey Tank, I've tried to read P & S #1, I really have. I've sped=read thru some of it so I get the gist of the sequel. It looks interesting. Keep writing! Chris "Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14997 08/27/04 11:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca... Wendymr Pulitzer
Wendymr Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,454 London (the one in Ontario, Ca...	Whoa! You posted! Okay, so now I really think your super-secret mystery BR needs to find the next part in her mailbox pretty soon. I love the dynamics in this story. Clark is the boyfriend, sure, but Bill Henderson is the partner and best friend... and, I'm convinced, also in love with Lois. We know they dated, but we only have Lois's throwaway comment that it didn't work. So she's dating Clark, and Bill's... maybe a little bit jealous? I could comment on how nicely you're writing Lois and Clark's developing relationship. I could even say that I hope Superman will reappear at some point in this story. But for now I'm just going to quiver at the thought of Bill getting deeper and deeper with Nigel St John - and being asked to kill Lois! More soon!! Wendy Just a fly-by! waves

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14998 08/27/04 09:11 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia T TriciaW Pulitzer
TriciaW Pulitzer T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,992 Sydney Australia	Tank I'm glad you're posting. An excellent start! Tricia

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #14999 08/30/04 12:22 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	All the trademark Tank stuff in here. Lots of potential for a really bumpy ride. Wouldn't want it any other way! CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #15000 08/30/04 08:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ Supes1fan Top Banana
Supes1fan Top Banana Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,047 NJ	Ahhh, yes..love the smell of a sequel!! Great start..can't wait to read MORE! ~Liz Lois: Can I go? Clark: No. Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go. Clark: Then why do you ask? Lois: I’m trying to be nice.

Re: COMMENTS: To Protect and Serve II - part 1 #15001 09/02/04 02:03 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank OP Merriwether
OP Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Sorry, I forgot to come back and thank the gentle readers for their nice words. Thanks... Not many questions yet... chapter two is up. Tank (who needs to get some more written if he doesn't want to pull a Yvonne)

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