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Okay, I know it's a couple of days early, and that this will be the third chapter posted when I've only written two more since then.

Call me crazy.

This is the spot for the gentle readers to go for it.

Tank (who can't believe he's posting early when it puts him behind in the writing vs. posting)

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Uh-oh... help

This isn't looking too good. Nigel and Ariana are paying Dr Mamba to do some more work for them... and that can't be anything desirable, surely. frown Clark's got beaten up and is all battered and bruised (/me thinks he needs a - very gentle wink - hug), and he and Lois are disgreeing on what Bill told Lois. Now, that can't be good for Lois and Clark's relationship, can it? sad

And what's Bill up to now? confused He can't be getting himself into yet more trouble, can he? He'd better not... shock

More soon!!


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What means "The Return of A Superman" - is it Clark or a clone?

Lois is right - Clark should listen to her and be more careful until he learns self-defence.


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Clark's healing powers are returning.

Lois will learn to like flying with him!

Henderson is going to learn what a tangled web he weaved when he first practiced to deceive....

More soon, please Tank (so that means - -- write as you go...what the Heck!)


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Interesting Post Tank. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Hi,

Great part. razz Henderson in love with Lois?
eek Not good.
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Interesting, Tank!! thumbsup

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An excellent part! smile1

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Finally caught up. {pant pant}

Good story, so far.

I see a Superman returning, but will it be a clone or the real thing?

Nigel is not stupid and Bill isn't either. This could be interesting...

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I've always thought that Nigel and Lex both have a 'sound.' And I've never been able to get anywhere close to it. But Nigel is just right here, so chilling. This, especially:

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"It's a common failing of the those who are confident in their own abilities when they undertake what they think is merely an undercover operation." He paused, adding a dramatic effect. "They refuse to see that they have actually become what they thought they were only pretending to be."
Just feel like Henderson is walking into an already spun web...

Then, there was this:

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And even after a few months Lois could see that it was the man behind the spandex who'd made Superman who he was, not the powers. The powers just made it easier for him to be who he was. So, of course, if he saw someone needing help, he had to help. It was an instinctive reaction.
Loved that for how smart it is. And that Clark can't just turn his back, or even do the safer thing, call for help. He just goes, and lol'ed at his 'it doesn't even hurt to breathe any more!'

But what I found most poignant, and subsequently, makes me worried, was Bill in his apartment, in his old chair. A lonely picture you painted with little touches:

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He shook his head. A meaningless gesture, being alone in a dark room.
You're going to kill Henderson, aren't you, Tank??!

Since I'm thinking you won't come right out and reassure me, I'm just going to start preparing myself for that.

And, yeah, Arianna and Nigel and Dr Mamba...that canNOT be good. But this part really, really was.

CC


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Oh crap!

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CC wrote:
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You're going to kill Henderson, aren't you, Tank??!
He'd better not!!!! razz


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CC, what makes you think I'm going to kill off Henderson? wink

Thanks for the comments from all the gentle readers still hanging in there.

I know there's a lot of fics vying for attention at present, but I did foolishly say that I would post at least once a week. So, I guess that's why I posted the next part tonight.

Tank (who should have realized that it works better to write new parts when you post instalments tha eat into the story buffer)


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