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Wow very sad and then WHAP! Lois saves the day. Nice. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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Very nice. It was sad at the beginning, happy in the middle, and got that final snicker in. I liked it.

Though, are you sure it was the Grim Reaper that said Drat, and not Tempus? wink


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thumbsup Very nice Mary. The last line had me laugh .

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I see you've been bit with the Alt-Clark finding his Lois bug! Very nice~!


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Mick Jagger president? eek

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Great piece. smile1


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What a wonderfully original way to give Alt Clark his Lois! thumbsup thumbsup

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Mick Jagger? He's not a citizen wink

Loved it though, especially that this Lois was happy to accept Alt Clark in lieu of the other one.

That would be an interesting story too. Can we have a prequel? laugh

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Thanks for this evening's entertainment.

As soon as Clark and the letter idea presented itself, and the bit about Alice, I was saying oh no . Poor Clark. It moved me immensely.

There was a total shift of feeling when Wells appeared. I was almost irritated. Lately I've hated the guy. Though, I was happy that Lois was there to save Clark (and I know Wells…blah). He deserved happiness. If you left out that part, the story could have stood on it's own. It could have been a riveting letter. I’m sure my opinion will be splattered with various vegetables.

I was mentally preparing myself for the worst. I had a strong sense of relief when Lois saved the day. It took me out of the sad dark place. Hope and love are wonderful things to give a person; those are just some of the things that Lois gave Clark in just such a short time - wonderful.

The next surge of emotion was that of rotflol . I can't believe that you were able to pull that off. Good job! That was a funny touch. I didn't feel like being left in the doldrums tonight and this was the perfect ticket away from that.

I am impressed with the change my emotional direction took in such a short spanse of time w/o a huge hoopla. Wham, bam, thank you mme and it's over. frown Sometimes a good short story is what you need.

(Please excuse my spelling. Tonight I seem to be going blank on some stuff. Roo! Stop reading and go to bed!)


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