Mere, sorry I'm late. Not sure how I missed your posting part 1, but I'm glad I noticed Part 2.
I read part 1 last night, but ran out of battery power just before I was ready to post comments.
Wow, what a start! Beautifully written, and very funny at times. Lois as the confused seductress works really well. Poor confused seductee (is that a word? It is now...) Clark. Love the cliffhanger.
I'll get to part 2 soon, I hope, but I'm still behind in my reading. Definitely looking forward to it, though. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Paul