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Hi,

Great piece. hyper


Maria D. Ferdez.
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shock -moments in this part to even start quoting.

Get back here! I need to see how you resolve this.

~Julia

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Kind of sucks all the romance out of the evening doesn't it. wink

Tank (who despares over all the stories with Lois getting pregnant, but he finally saw the final episode of JAG for this season and will be interested to see how this plays out)

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Thanks for the feedback! smile

Julia, I hope your being speechless is a good thing... wink

Tank... yeah, sorry about that. :p I promise not to put any icky pregnancy stuff in this fic, though (unlike another of my WIPs goofy ).

On with part 2...

Mere smile


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Mere, sorry I'm late. Not sure how I missed your posting part 1, but I'm glad I noticed Part 2.

I read part 1 last night, but ran out of battery power just before I was ready to post comments.

Wow, what a start! Beautifully written, and very funny at times. Lois as the confused seductress works really well. Poor confused seductee (is that a word? It is now...) Clark. Love the cliffhanger.

I'll get to part 2 soon, I hope, but I'm still behind in my reading. Definitely looking forward to it, though. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Paul


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