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It's been a week since I last posted and even though there are lots of fics out there to read, I did promise to post at least once a week.
Of course, I haven't written anything in that week's time so, this is not a good thing.
If you desire it, you can make your nasty remarks here.
Tank (who now remembers that he has to go back and answer the last comments post)
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Kerth
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"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Top Banana
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Maybe we could compromise?
Henderson just spends the rest of this fic warily watching an active volcano and trying to swim back to Metropolis...rather than being killed??
(I haven't forgotten Cat in the Futures series, you know. Just thought I'd mention.)
And, oh man, when I voted with Wendy on the subtitle 'Return of Superman,' I was thinking the less creative, more traditional, return of the good guy! But you brought us the clone!! The bad, bad clone!!!
And I *love* that. Had me on the edge of my seat, and his dialogue, his menace...perfect.
Ok. This concludes the gushing. If it keeps Henderson alive another part or two, though, it's well worth it.
Write more, post faster.
CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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/me had a sneaking suspicion that there would be a return of a Superman somewhere in this story...  And, CC, as far as Henderson is concerned I'm still telling Tank what I told him in the last instalment. I could, of course, threaten to have Clark crush Lois to death after his nightmare in DBAS...  )
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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Pulitzer
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"Ever met an active volcano up close and personal?"  Bad! Bad Superman Clone! There is something awfully mature about this clone. This is no little kid in an adult's body clone. This is a fully matured BAD GUY! Now would be a good time for Clark's body to give up the last of it's wimpiness!!! James
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Top Banana
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Tank, this is a great time for the REAL SUPERMAN to find out that he has his powers back!
If you kill Henderson, I'm going to write a Lois Lane story where her hair is down to her feet and SHE NEVER CUTS IT <g>
Well, I'm sure you'll find a more creative way to resolve the story
Chris
"Together we are stronger than each of us is apart"
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If you kill Henderson, I'm going to write a Lois Lane story where her hair is down to her feet and SHE NEVER CUTS IT <g> And I'm going to write the sequel to that story, in which Hair-to-the-Floor Lois marries Jimmy Olsen and has a hundred babies. Just saying. CC
You mean we're supposed to have lives?
Oh crap!
~Tank
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Oh no!  I'm not too happy with this recent development! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Tank An excellent part!  Tricia 
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Hi, Great part.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Thanks to all the gentle readers who have been able to find the time amongst all the offerings out there to continue to follow this feeble effort.
Tank (who is so 'freakin' bogged down with convention stuff that he is losing track of all the stories being posted at present, including his own)
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Sorry that I just read this. As I posted at the end of Part 13, this is a great story. One quibble, though: You can't use a silencer on a revolver, despite what movies and television have shown us, and they aren't very effective on a larger caliber. Anything bigger than a .32 auto just won't go 'phut' like Hollywood says, so please either drop the silencer musings or give him an automatic. Other than that, this is just great!
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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