Good part, Sara.
Nice step forwards on the plot. Take that, evil warehouse woman!
Good realistic handling of the Henderson/Bermuda deal.
I feel bad for Lois's plant. Poor thing is going the way of its predecesors, isn't it? Nice touch.
Wow, they're going to tell the newsroom, huh? Big step. That's going to make things all the more difficult for both of them, isn't it?
BTW, on a minor side note, I found the extra returns in this part to be a little distracting. Not a major deal, but thought I'd mention it.
Also, this kind of jumped out at me:
Her fingers found the hem of her shirt and she lifted it slowly, revealing the small pooch in her midsection.
I thought she was pregnant with a baby, not a dog. Oh, is that the little Taco Bell dog? Did she get that along with her taquitos? Maybe that's why she has heartburn...
Oh, you meant
that kind of pooch. That makes a bit more sense...
(Sorry, I really should go get some sleep...)
Anyway, looking forward, as always, to seeing more of this.
Paul
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I was having a little fight with Word...and well...thanks for pointing it out! 
), I might even post early.