Thanks to my loyal but shrinking readers for your feedback. I suppose when you make a story fairly complicated, some give up and figure they'll just read it when it hits the archive!
Part 21 is up...a bit short, but I'm leaving on a road trip for three weeks on Saturday the 2nd...will have my laptop with me so I'll be writing in the motel rooms. Driving down to Key West FL and back...from CT. Hopefully no more hurricanes!