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First off, I noticed a mentioning of Superman... Maybe he could arrange to meet her as Superman and watch his words? Oh, I loved this part to no ends! The way Clark can't stop thinking about Lois. Their time in the park... what an atmosphere! Their attraction to each other was really palpable! And then the non-kiss... quite a potential for awkwardness... I'm looking forward to the interview of Friend Man. To Lois reaction to him in person. To Clark's feelings while being grilled by Lois. Why can't it be Friday already? Sira - devoted fan of TLRH
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Beautifully written picnic. The two are really electric together. And yet, in their angst ridden world, their fighting what is so obvious to the rest of us. I picked up what Sira picked up as well. You just want to call him Superman and you can't stop yourself. I'm looking forward to her meeting with the Super hero guy. gerry
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Hi, Great part. They are so cute together. Clark's eyebrows lifted. "Agnes? Who's that? A relative?"
That made Lois chuckle. "No, though I suppose we both think of her as a surrogate something. She's my neighbor. She's eighty-four going on twenty, and I've known her since I moved into my apartment building many years ago." Her grin broadened and she shook her head. "She's quite a character."
"Sounds like you're close," Clark observed. Beautiful description of Agnes. She paused to pull up a few blades of grass, then rolled them absently between her fingers as she went on. "I bounced around a bit, staying with different friends for short periods of time while I worked a couple of jobs--one in the evenings and another on the weekends. It was tough, but I refused to let me school work slip. I had a lot of sleepless nights as I stayed up late to finish my homework." She smiled, but there was little humor in it. "It paid off, though, and I graduated with Valedictorian honors. I got several scholarships, and between those and the money I'd managed to save while working, I was able to put myself through college."
"Didn't you have an inheritance, or get anything from their life insurance policies?"
"That would have been nice," Lois agreed, "but the ironic thing was, as smart as my parents were, they were never very practical. My dad was a scientist and my mom was a nurse, so they made a decent living, but they put most of their earnings into funding my dad's research. There wasn't much left to inherit. To make matters worse, they'd let their life insurance policy lapse several months before the accident and never got around to renewing it. No, I was pretty much on my own." Does this accident have anything to do with Sam's research? Lois looked up shyly, and their eyes met. She stared into Clark's beautiful brown eyes and found herself transfixed by the gentleness and compassion she saw there, shining through from the depths of his soul. She was aware of Clark lifting a hand to her face, but she found herself unable to move, unable to breathe, as the world around her faded into a misty haze. The only thing that remained in focus was the man in front of her. I think she will recognize Clark when she see him his Hero suit. She forced a smile she didn't feel amidst the raging confusion seeping through her body, then nodded. "Thanks, Clark. For now, though, let's just head back to the Planet. It sounds like you have work to do." Then her voice became more business-like as she forced the unsettling emotions from the surface. "You need to get in touch with Mr. Super Hero for me, too, remember?"
Clark sighed, the mood of before now broken. "I know, Lois. I'll see what I can do." Give her that interview. More ASAP, please. MAF
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Oh, what a hussy that Lois is. Allowing a man she hardly knows to almost kiss her. Tsk. Tsk.
Clark I can understand. After all, who could resist Lois Lane.
Looking forward to the interview.
Tank (who thinks that Erin should take advantage of the current lightness in story posts and post her next chapter say... tomorrow?)
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Originally posted by Tank: Tank (who thinks that Erin should take advantage of the current lightness in story posts and post her next chapter say... tomorrow?) Ahhh, music to my ears. I'm so thrilled to hear you guys are enjoying it! Sira, Gerry, Maria, and Tank...thank you so much for your feedback! Sira--I'm tickled pink to hear you've become a devoted TLRH fan. Sira and Gerry--Thanks for the "Superman" useage alert! Gerry, you're right. I want to call him "Superman" and can't stop myself! Thanks for the feedback! You have no idea how much I appreciate it.
~~Erin
I often feel sorry for people who don't read good books; they are missing a chance to lead an extra life. ~ Scott Corbett ~
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Woho!!! Jose
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Jimmy, Jimmy, Jimmy... Why he always show up in the more inconvenient times? Couldn't he wait a bit more to call Clark? I held my breath waiting for the kiss... Geez, it was so near... I want to kill Jimmy! I'm looking forward for the interview. Will Lois recognize Clark? She already guessed "they" alike and mainly now that she and Clark are closer... Hmmmm... Has it possibilities, hasn't it? ~Andreia (waiting for one kiss - or more - in the next part)
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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posted by Tank: Oh, what an hussy that Lois is. Allowing a man she hardly knows to almost kiss her.Tsk.Tsk. Clark I can understand. After all, who could resist Lois Lane. Well, who could resist Clark Kent! Expecially a Clark who is so sweet, tender, and can stand up for himself? A great part, Erin, and I'm looking forward to The Interview, I'm wondering if she going to say: Clark what are you doing with this tights on???!!! Well, I can hope for it, this should be very interesting! Simona
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Just catching up on that story and I have to say WOW!
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Erin Another excellent part! Tricia
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