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  It certainly does stand alone, but I'd be interested to see more if you can come up with it. Very nice. Paul
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“So then we will lie to him, just like the council lied to the insane when they were all exiled, telling them that they were to found a colony.” Wohoo!  That definitely explains the New Kryptonians and their pig-headed determination to travel millions of light years for an heir who had to be first put through a series of tests to be deemed eligible. Wonderful prequel to an amazing new tale, perhaps? 
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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/me tries to bribe QoC's Muse  I hope this can be followed  Jose 
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Wow!!! Just shows how naive I am... I would not in my wildest dreams have come up with anything like that! It's a pity your muse doesn't want to cooperate. I hope Jose's bribing works. Oh, and yes I LOVE the NK explanation! Although I wonder how they would have found out about Kal-El.... Sira - duly impressed
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hi
OMG great idea!!!! I just love it!!!
Its great please continue the fic, I think is an amazing idea about NK and all that stuff...would be intersting to read the next parts.
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Wow! What a neat idea-- very different from anything else I've read. I, too, agree that - it explains the New Krypton thing well
- your muse needs bribing
This can stand alone or could be followed by more-- I guess it depends on whether you want to write some ansty stuff where either Jor-El and Lara are discovered, or tell someone, or meet up with Kal-El, or where Kal-El manages to see throught the deception. I suppose a globe built on an advanced planet such as Krypton would be drop-resistant, huh? And I suppose the recordings would be skip-resistant?  ~Toc
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Hi, Cute! Lara turned her attention back to the baby. She heard Jor-El’s footsteps retreat into a small room in the back of the laboratory, leaving her and their son alone. She cradled the infant tightly against her and dropped a kiss on his head. “Oh, my son,” she whispered. “My son, my little Kal-El. I am so sorry. Please forgive us. If circumstances were different, we would gladly keep you and raise you!” Her eyes became misty. “Jor-El and I both love you.”
She was unaware of the passage of time; she could have been sitting there for two minutes or two years. All too soon, she felt Jor-El’s hand on her shoulder once more.
“Lara, it’s time. Everything is ready, and we must report back to the council tomorrow.”
She looked up into his eyes, and noticed that they were uncharacteristically filled with tears.
“It’s time.”
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Mary An excellent premise and a great explanation for the New Kryptonians! Tricia 
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