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Beautiful. Just so beautiful.
Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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Oh, wowwwwwwww!!!!!!
That was just "spectacular"!
Wow, that was so great!
I don't know what else to say..........I'm speechless
Echo that was excellent and very very well wriitten.
I can't wait for the next addition.
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Awwwww, mush city..very sweet!
~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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gooshy mooshy sappy waffy grin all over...IWANNAGOFLYINGWITHCLARK!!!!! /me stomps feet petulantly Well done   TEEEEEEEEEJ
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Hi, Great part.  I think that story he will win her a position at the Planet. :rolleyes: I don't think Jim will be too happy that Lois will work with another reporter for another newspaper. Their eyes met and held, and Lois felt the swarm of butterflies start to flutter about crazily in her stomach as Clark seemed to move imperceptibly closer. She felt pulled to Clark by a mysterious force, her heart thumping loud enough that she was sure Clark could hear it, even without super hearing.
She held her breath as their faces neared, her skin tingling as she felt his warm breath on her face. In eager anticipation, she closed her eyes as his lips touched hers. Instantly her knees went weak, and she was glad for the steadying arm Clark slipped around her waist. The world disappeared in a haze around her, and all Lois could think about was Clark's kiss, tender, meaningful, and perfect. She hardly dared to breathe for fear it would disrupt the deliciousness of the moment.
When they finally drifted apart, Lois felt heady and breathless, and she could tell by Clark's expression he was feeling the same way. A grin worked its way across her face as she looked up into his eyes. She'd never been in love before, but she was sure this was exactly what it felt like.  More ASAP, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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It's a set up.
It has to be. It's much to early in the story for things to be going this well... isn't it?
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Oh yes, this was just beautiful! 
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The perfect first date.
I don't blame Lois for thinking that's what true love feels like.
But sitting at the back of my mind is this niggle that Lois hadn't deleted her expose for her computer...please, no!
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Wow, what a sweet night and he kissed her too! It reminded me a little of the Sman movies when Sman takes Lois for her first flight and that song "Can you read my mind" was playing. The feeling Lois had flying with Clark, is similar, only this story is better because he kissed her. Now I have the oldie "and then he kissed me" going through my head. Very romantic date. I need a fan! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Yay!
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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Long Trip Home? Is this a mix of Long Strange Trip and The Long Road Home? LOL!  I loved this part!!! So romantic... ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/smilie/liebe/s020.gif) But you like to see us to suffer, uh? ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/smilie/teufel/k050.gif) I read all the chapter waiting for a kiss and found nothing. Then, when I was losing the hope, suddenly, *that* kiss. ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/midi/liebe/d035.gif) Ohhhh... I'm madly loving this story! Post soon, please. I want MORE!!! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/smilie/haushalt/e075.gif) ~Andreia (who is impatiently waiting Lois delet that article) ![[Linked Image]](http://www.cosgan.net/images/smilie/konfus/n040.gif)
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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