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Hi

Love this part.

Next part soon please.

I love this fic

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Hi,

Great part. drool

More ASAP, please.

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BRAVO Leela, I knew this would come out right! I knew it, and I know there's more, but from this last section, you've gotten exactly the kind of reaction from me I was anticipating. I was tense and chewing my lip and worried, and could barely breath, but it came out just perfect.

Lois and Clark have their first fight. WOW! And you see, Lois was the aggressor, I knew she could get mean if she got impatient enough. Our good, sweet, loving Clark was foot dragging enough to get her riled and I liked how you wrote this. The last section with the skater guy set that up perfectly.

Well Done Leela! clap clap clap clap

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Wow I was on pins and needles reading that installment...yikes~

Interesting that she said she channeled Lord Kal telepathically...

I want you to send an army of ALT -Clarks and beat the ---- out of that guy. What a great ending to this epic fic that would be!

(I'm not a violent person...really)


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Great work, Leela. I guess Lois got to work through her fears in a slightly different way than she'd planned... but, in an author-ly note, it was brilliant to turn it around so that she was the bully. Just the fact that she doesn't think twice about ordering Clark around ought to assure her that she's more healed than she thought. wink

More, more!

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Whoa, I can't believe they tried this w/o a therapist. Talk about jumping right in.

Great job on this Leela, Lois is really brave despite her slight setback.

~Liz


Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Wow Ok that was creepy. More soon. Laura


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